Naughty girls (and boys) who have faced spankings will know that awful, sinking feeling you get when it becomes quite clear that, no matter what, you’re going to get a smacked bottom. No backing out, no pleading, no sweet smile will get you out of it. You’re at the point of no return.
My Christmas short story features a very naughty girl who has – for the first time in her life – reached that very point. And, lucky her, the one determined to spank her is none other than jolly old Santa!
Hey, we’ve all been there... and what a nice place it is to be.
There are plenty more naughty treats to enjoy from the other Saturday Spankings participants! (Isn’t Saturday great?)
My Christmas short story features a very naughty girl who has – for the first time in her life – reached that very point. And, lucky her, the one determined to spank her is none other than jolly old Santa!
Pippa gulped and unthinkingly clasped her hands to her behind. She didn’t like the idea of a spanking at all...
“B-but...” she whimpered in one last bid for clemency, “I don’t want a spanking...”
Her appeal met with a stonily determined glare, she glanced anxiously about herself as if in search for a means of salvation. Seeing none, she made a sudden, desperate dash for the door. Unfortunately, Santa was ready for her and grabbed her by the wrist as she tried to pass him.
“You’re not going anywhere but over my knee, madam!” he snapped, and in the twinkling of an eye he pulled the mortified young woman down across his lap as easily as one might a toy doll.
Hey, we’ve all been there... and what a nice place it is to be.
There are plenty more naughty treats to enjoy from the other Saturday Spankings participants! (Isn’t Saturday great?)
Do you know I love the name Pippa? It's so cute. I love that Santa gives spankings. :)
ReplyDeleteI did not know that! And I'm glad to now. The thing about Santa is less of a surprise ;)
DeleteI know what I'm asking Santa for this year :D
ReplyDeleteI love her shock and attempted escape but so glad Santa was too quick for her. Now I'm being very naughty here and saying when I think of Pippa and round behind, Of course you know who I'm picturing across Santa's lap. That very famous Pippa's behind ;) Perhaps that was the intention??
Glad you liked, Tara! But no, I didn't have Miss Middleton in mind when I wrote it - though I'm picturing her in that unenviable position now. In that figure-hugging white dress she wore on her sister's big day, to be exact. Mmm...
DeletePenny, I can't believe you have a Christmas story and didn't tell me! Naughty little writer indeed. I love your whole setup. This is such great fantasy fodder.
ReplyDeleteI sorry, Ana. I guess I on Santa's naughty list now, huh? ;D
DeleteGlad you like the concept!
Oh, the toy doll simile. . . wow. Wonderful, wonderful writing, Penny.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Emily :D
DeleteConfession. I quite like being thrown about like a rag doll.
Poor Pippa, made it to the naughty list without trying. If only she could trade places with one of the people above here :P
ReplyDeleteOh, she earned her place on the list, don't worry! But yes, if only she could trade with any of the naughty girls here, her delicate rear would be saved from a good, hard you-know-what.
DeleteI'd rather get a spanking than coal in my stocking anyday.
ReplyDeletelol, same here :)
DeleteIs this what happens if you don't leave out milk and cookies for Santa? :)
ReplyDeleteAww :D you know Celeste, I think you might be onto something there. Best be on the safe side, huh!
DeleteHaha! I would never have thought of Santa spanking...clever.
ReplyDeleteGlad I amused, Normandie :)
DeleteI love/hate that crossing-the-line moment. Poor Pippa.
ReplyDeleteYep, it's a real dual feeling, isn't it? I'd still swap places with her in a heartbeat, though.
DeleteOoh I just thought you didn’t get presents when you were on the naughty list :)
ReplyDeleteNot in this story, Constance ;D you get a nice warm bottom to help the lesson sink in!
DeleteAfter the spanking, I think Pippa (possibly Penny..) deserves a present - a punishment school uniform she must wear all over Christmas..)
ReplyDeleteOoh! Yes! *claps*
DeleteA spanking and a school uniform? It's naughty list all the way for me!
What a tantalising snippet! You don't say whose eye this twinkling business is occurring in, but I think it might be the big guy with the beard...
ReplyDeleteLike Tara I thought Pippa's little escape bid was very cute. Good luck outrunning the guy who visits hundreds of millions of households in a single night. I should imagine at least that Santa's lap is a comfortable one, though - all that red velour.
And I agree about the point of no return - a spankee should never imagine s/he can backpedal once s/he's already past that tipping point. Like Wile E. Coyote briefly suspended in mid-air after running off the cliff, you've only one place to go next!
it's the loss of control that's so powerful, I think. I do so love to tell my 'naughty girl': "Whenever I decide you need it, you're going to find yourself right here across my knee. And there's nothing at all that you can do about it."
I suspect she rather likes it too :).
Thanks for the lovely comment, Underling! I'm so glad you liked my little snippette.
DeleteI rather think you and I think along similar lines - there is something wonderfully, erotically powerful about the loss of control, yes. I hope to capture that moment, and the moments that follow, (and the feelings that are aroused) more and more capably as I develop as a writer. Because there is a vast ocean of erotic pleasure there to be explored.
P.S. I also suspect your naughty girl rather likes the experience. Behaviour that has to be worth a demerit or two!
There's something about a spanking Santa, who already keeps track of whether we are naughty or nice, that's both naughty and appealing. Love the snippet, Penelope.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kathryn! It's a fun idea to think about, isn't it? :D
DeleteI love that Santa still had a twinkle in his eye and she was tossed like a toy doll! It's like a good old fashioned Christmas story :)
ReplyDeleteHehe, thanks Casey! I suppose the story is a tad Enid Blyton-esque, really :)
DeleteA delightful snippet, Penny. As a child, I was always so impressed that Santa could get around to give presents to all the good boys and girls. But to shoulder the responsibility of spanking all the naughty ones, now that would be a job of truly incredible proportions. :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you like it, TFD :)
DeleteYes, he's a wonder alright. And he must have a hell of a spanking arm!
hehe fun and naughty... I love Santa's "madam"
ReplyDeleteOh yes, a good "madam" every now and then never hurts in my book :D
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