Saturday, 12 October 2013

A virgin bottom gets spanked

It’s Saturday! The spankiest day of the week!

My contribution to Saturday Spankings this time is a scene from my F/F WIP in which never-before-spanked Emily finds herself bent over, fearfully awaiting punishment at the hands of her lover, Charlotte.

“You are an adult, Emily. An adult with responsibilities that you should take seriously. Each of the smacks I give you is a reminder of that fact. As each one comes I want you to think about what you have done to earn it. Will you do that for me?”

I closed my eyes, scarcely daring to breathe, heart thumping against my chest, trying to comprehend the moment. “Yes,” I whispered.

I should probably have anticipated the first smack but it came as a surprise, a sudden flash of pain and sound throwing my eyes open.

Here are all the blogs taking part in Saturday Spankings this week:

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37 comments:

  1. Cara Bristol12 October 2013 at 12:20

    A classic scene. Wonder what she did to earn the spanking.

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  2. Unknown12 October 2013 at 12:40

    How did you make this post magically appear?? ;) A lovely piece Penelope, pretty and sexy all at once. Looking forward to more.

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    1. Penelope16 October 2013 at 10:12

      Thanks, Natasha! I shall have to poke the hamsters who write this stuff a little harder. *poke poke* Faster! Write!

      And I can make all sorts of things appear magically cos I'm MAGIC.

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  3. Unknown12 October 2013 at 14:07

    Love how you capture that moment perfectly.

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  4. PK Corey12 October 2013 at 14:25

    I always want to know what gets someone in this position. Guess I have some reading to do.

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    1. Penelope16 October 2013 at 10:16

      I am a terrible tease, aren't I? A bad, wicked, naughty tease!

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  5. Unknown12 October 2013 at 14:46

    You captured the fearful anticipation of a girls first spanking!
    I love the first times. I hope Charlotte makes it memorable for her.
    Nice excerpt, Penelope!

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    1. Penelope16 October 2013 at 10:17

      Thanks, LA :)

      I shall do my very best to make sure it's a memorable experience for her and us.

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  6. Unknown12 October 2013 at 15:50

    Adult responsibilities, what a drag! I love Emily's anticipation.

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    1. Penelope16 October 2013 at 10:19

      Hehe :D

      Thanks, Casey! I always find that part easy to write, actually - I just channel my own thoughts and feelings.

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  7. Maddie Taylor Romance12 October 2013 at 16:30

    Oh my, the dreaded lecture... and we all know what comes next. Nice

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    1. Penelope16 October 2013 at 10:21

      I'm a total lecture whore (if I can use such a word before eleven in the morning) - they get me so hot! And they always seem to sneak into my spanking scenes...

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  8. Unknown12 October 2013 at 16:54

    That sudden surprise of the virgin spankee as that slap is so much harsher than anticipated is beautifully captured Penelope

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    1. Penelope16 October 2013 at 10:25

      Thank you, Tara!

      I'm kinda envious of Emily, to be honest, getting to experience her first time. The lucky thing :D

      Hm! Random thought two weeks after the roleplay round table. Part of the motivation behind RP for me is to capture something of that 'never before spanked' headspace. Interesting!

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  9. Celeste Jones12 October 2013 at 18:06

    I can feel her anticipation. Nice job!

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    1. Penelope16 October 2013 at 10:26

      So gratifying to hear that, Celeste - thank you :)

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  10. Ruth Staunton12 October 2013 at 18:14

    The first smack never fails to be a shock.

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    1. Penelope16 October 2013 at 10:28

      They're good like that, aren't they? :D I love that moment and those surrounding it: they're pure erotic magic.

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  11. Unknown12 October 2013 at 19:44

    If your name is Emily I think you are in for a spanking today. Lol

    Usually I find virgins boring, but not virgins to spanking! Great snippet.

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    1. Penelope16 October 2013 at 10:29

      Thanks, Normandie!

      Yes, it seems Emilys are getting plenty of firm attention lately. And quite right too, the naughty things!

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  12. Unknown13 October 2013 at 05:10

    Funny that, even though you know it’s coming it’s always a shock. Lovely snippet Penelope :)

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    1. Penelope16 October 2013 at 10:48

      Thank you, Constance :)

      Yep, there's just something about that first smack... it's one of those things you can never quite anticipate. Yum.

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  13. Emily Tilton13 October 2013 at 13:24

    Tiny hints of ageplay, like sparks in a low-burning fire. . . wonderful.

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    1. Penelope16 October 2013 at 10:49

      Thank you, Emily! That really means a lot to me.

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  14. Renee Rose13 October 2013 at 20:22

    mmm, very lovely!

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    1. Penelope16 October 2013 at 10:50

      Thanks, Renee :) of course, you'd know all about lovely things. You lovely thing xx

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  15. Unknown14 October 2013 at 01:55

    Mmm, I loved the lecture with it!
    Very nice, Penny!
    :)

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    1. Penelope16 October 2013 at 11:19

      Thanks, Katherine! Good to know a fellow lecture fan. :)

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  16. Unknown14 October 2013 at 17:32

    I hate lectures! But damn a question in a lecture that is just wrong... I'm never prepared for the first swat either. Perfect.

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    1. Penelope16 October 2013 at 11:25

      Oh, I love questions - they're so unfair! Such a humiliating reminder of the spanker and spankee's relative positions. (Just my sort of thing...)

      Thanks for the kind words :)

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  17. Mr X14 October 2013 at 19:43

    Very erotic snippet,Penny,I can imagine you as a very hot Emily!

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    1. Penelope16 October 2013 at 11:30

      Thanks, Mr X :)

      And yes, though the name has cunningly been changed I think there's a lot of me in that naughty girl. I shall have to make sure she gets all the beatings she deserves!

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    2. Mr X18 October 2013 at 22:15

      You ceryainly deserve them, Penny (in the nicest possible way..) Big Hugs xxx

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  18. Joelle Casteel17 October 2013 at 00:59

    lovely moment :)

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